A good start.
Some things I notice..The intro makes the song seem like its going to build up, and around 00:26 I expected some kind of exploision into the main melody and beat but that never happened, so it was more of a tease than anything. I do like the melody, bass and the beat you have going on, but you should do some break down/build ups because that will really get people into the song. Once you do that I can see this song really going somewhere. Hope my review helps!