Very good song!
A very nice cover of a good song. Your vocals are quite nice, though they could be mixed just a little louder. I'd kill to be able to sing like you can.
5/5
10/10
Author Comments
A cover of Bon Jovi's "You want to make a Memory" as performed by me. All music produced by me, and vocals done by me.
It's not likely many of you remember me,
It's not likely this will maintain a high score or stay on the charts very long (I remember newgrounds beautiful zero bombing community)
This is something I worked on in my own time, and I thought I would share it with the one or two people who might come across my page with a gleaming hope of hearing something different.
I'm afraid I won't be submitting much, due to being in my new band "Pseudo Escape". But I still love you guys. I also still answer PM's.
Lyrics:
Hello again, it's you and me
Kinda always like it used to be
Sippin' wine, killin' time
Tryin' to solve life's mysteries
How's your life? It's been a while
God it's good to see you smile
I see you reachin' for your keys
Lookin' for a reason not to leave
If you don't know if you should stay
If you don't say what's on your mind
Baby just breathe
There's nowhere else tonight we should be
You wanna make a memory?
I dug up this old photograph
Look at all that hair we had
It's bittersweet to hear you laugh
Your phone is ringin' I don't wanna ask
If you go now, I'll understand
If you stay, hey, I got a plan
You wanna make a memory?
You wanna steal a piece of time?
You can sing the melody to me
And I could write a couple lines
You wanna make a memory?
If you don't know if you should stay
And you don't say what's on your mind
Baby just breathe
There's nowhere else tonight we should be
We should be
You wanna make a memory?
You wanna steal a piece of time?
You can sing the melody to me
And I can write a couple lines
You wanna make a memory?
You wanna make a memory?
Missing your music.
I'm so thrilled to see you posting again, man. I loved the minimalist arrangement. Bass, drums, piano and a hint of strings. As for the vocals, they were fine but I can see you fret a bit over them. I noticed you laid off the vocal correction which is great because you carry your pitch fine without it. Don't be afraid to mix your vocals a tad louder. The reverb is down to personal taste and from my perspective it's become a part of your overall style. But I'd say bring the reverb down just a tiny notch. The presence should be there, but avoid the echoing consonants as they're a bit distracting. But I'm just nitpicking here. It's a beautiful track and I find myself liking it better than the original. This is going straight to my mp3 player. Your music is like crack to me, so thanks for the update.
10/10
Like it!
Nice song man
I never fogrot you. And i probably never will :)
why do i feel like...
that blue october inspired this lol
MilkMan-Dan responds:
Blue October?... no idea what you're talking about actually. Just happens to be one of my favourite Bon Jovi songs, although my friends make fun of me for picking one of his least epic pieces. Thanks for the review.
MMD
Credits & Info
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4.22 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Dec 3, 2010
- 5:29 PM EST
- Genre
- General Rock
- File Info
- Song
- 3.2 MB
- 3 min 33 sec
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