I agree with daft-maxx

you got some great things going here but overall its only average :/

i really like some aspects of the song, but a really dont like other things. I would work on redoing this one after learning or working on some things.

oh and something that he didnt touch on is that is i thought it was NOT gonna work at 2:17, but then it sounded amazing!!! until 2:22 and 2:30. That other instrument needed to be blended better with the rest of the song, and changed in pitch a little at those 2 instances. The final part is also off-key.

It's okay

The intro is okay, but I think it's kinda abrupt and it also sounds you didn't putt a lot of effort in it. I mean, it start immediately and I don't like it that way. And the bass that comes in at 0:08 is cool. And the loop at 0:24 is rather anoying than cool, because it's always at the left side. But then, LAWD ALMIGHTY! I don't know what you're doing at 0:40 but it's awesome! It's sounds just like Faithless. And YOU should replace them! But, I'll continue with my review...
I really like the drums that come in at 0:12. They are simple and give you a power which makes you think you can do anything. And than that smooth loop at 1:44 makes you calm and stuff. But I'll have to tell you this, when they mix up at 1:17 they don't sounds good at all. I'm talking about that loop that sounds like Faithless and the one that dropped in at 1:44.
But in overall, it's a good song. Almost no complaints :D

I'll tell you what awaits!

Ma'fuckin' LAVOS!! Overfiend of time itself! And literal consumer of worlds!
Play Chrono Trigger, other than being obnoxious I really did enjoy this! 5/5

Lavos... He's been with us since 65'000'000 B.C. and he'll stay with us until he ends it in a blaze of glorious evil!

nice

right at 0:40 i thought for a few seconds i was listening to faithless (i love faithless) ;)
but now they r stopping and u have to replace them, i know u can!

was a little slow in the beginning...

but it picked up rather well when the drum parts came in. really got my head bobbing. I felt the outro could have been done better but either than that this was a pretty good song.