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(HoS) Spirit of the Dawn-trial

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Uploaded
Nov 28, 2010 | 10:38 PM EST
File Info
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3 MB
1 min 53 sec
Score
4.34 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.34 / 5 stars
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1,773 Plays | 160 Downloads
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Genres:
Easy Listening - Classical
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Author Comments

RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE AND THANKYOU

THIS SONG IS NOT FINISHED!!! TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND ANY RECOMMENDATIONS YOU MAY HAVE THAT WOULD MAKE IT BETTER!!!

READ ME!!!!!!!
READ ME NOW!!!!!!!
Ok, So my origional ideas and inspired thoughts were of a romance between a guy and a girl who would always meet in the market town square at the start of sun set. Of their adventures that made them grow closer and the time spent together.
And also another inspiring thought was one of a spirit who rezides in the cold, misty and breazy woods, alone but one with nature. A rare sight among human eyes, always fleeing and hiding from those of a corrupt nature. Sometimes, if your lucky, just as the sun rises over the mountains you may catch a glimps of her in the grove, dancing and basking in the warm light.

RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE AND THANKYOU

Reviews


EzaacEzaac

Rated 5 / 5 stars

NICE!!



ZefearZefear

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Inspiring.

I like the song so far, but I also believe there is much you can do with it from here. I would say to start the song out in a slight darker tone. Give the listener a taste of the pre-dawn, let that sound paint a picture that is dark and slowly blooms into a flower in all the shades of the forest dawn. Having watched many a sunrise myself I have noticed that as you are watching the sun come up and chase away the shadows and chill of the night, there is always a pause, a seeming stillness that captures the moment, and on that note I think a brief pause for effect would work wonders on the overall flow of the song, somewhere between the first 1/4 and 1/3 of the song. Sorry if my review is a tad bit confusing, i have never personally studied music, but as a writer i often look to it for inspiration. Good luck and great job!


HonorOfStyle responds:

Thanks. and no not at all, infact your review makes perfect sence to me and i like your ideas for making it better I think i'll try them. Until you said that i was planing on discontinuing this one cuz i didn't kno wat to do on it. but now i think i'll finish it. Im also a bit of a writer myself also, and i too get much of my inspiration from music, 99% of the time from NG.


bnnsbnns

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Ending Loop

I was thinking it would pretty neat if the song was loopable it's good music it just seemed like the end was missing that.


HonorOfStyle responds:

Yah actually Im not sure if I'll ever continue working on it, so your idea really seems like a good alternative. Thanks for your input! :)