Needs some work, good effort!
It sounds a little bit confused to me, like it isn't sure what kind of song that it wants to be, and not leaving me with anything memorable. I didn't feel connected to this one.
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Needs some work, good effort!
It sounds a little bit confused to me, like it isn't sure what kind of song that it wants to be, and not leaving me with anything memorable. I didn't feel connected to this one.
Hmmm kk, well its for Music GCSE and ive got another 5 hours to work on it, so i should be able to give it more of a theme, something to hold it all together. Thanks for reviewing
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