Has potential but could be so much more powerful.
Hey there. There's no doubt in my mind that this is a good piece however, you could do so much more with it.
It feels like there is something missing at the start. Personally I would have liked to hear some nice horns in this piece, especially at the start where it could give you a hint to a nice sustained theme. Then all of a sudden as soon as it hits in 1:12 you blare a whole brass section with using staccato choirs to emphasise your string spiccatos. Great strong effects and crescendos would help you emphasise your gains and build ups.
You have nice percussions but rather than just use Evolve us a mixture of plugins to get a wide varied of percussion.
Great work overall but include more orchestra for more power.