Battle music of the random persuasion.
Good start
It's a good start but you really need to work on your EQing and mixing. There's so much going on that the highs and lows are fighting each other and the mids are a real battleground. There's some very slight honking in your beats, so you should EQ them to bring down the highs some more and shape the sound.
Thanks for the response! I agree with the first sentence. Unfortunately, it's something that's so far back on the back-burner that I doubt I'll ever get to it. I tried researching websites and youtube, but it was all too time consuming for a full time college student/full time worker. It's a real shame too, because music is a passion of mine, and I just don't have the time needed to improve my skill, nor do I know someone who could tutor me in Mixing and EQing (Along with many other musical needs).
If you have any wonder resources that could quickly and easily teach me, though, send me a message. Any help would be appreciated.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Nfinity 
