Smooth pt2
this matches you, nice
Fayde on the beat (http://poyzenjam.newgrou nds.com/)
MC Mao with Phr0zen on the flows.
Winter. Boo.
Lyrics:
Mao-
Been sleeping throught morning, emerging in the afternoon
Eating cereal for lunch, sweeping away last night with a broom
Im asking you what time it is, I think I arrived too late
Let me restart this day so I can produce a new slate
I'll carve my requirements, permanently mark my time table
Set my alarm for sunrise and wake up without a bum ankle
Headaches and sore muscles are remedied by a cup of hot coffee
Im sedated by the bitter taste as it courses through my body
The car seat is frozen, I forgot to plug in the block heater
I left the window open, the frost built up on the rear speakers
They crisp, they crack, as they disort all my favourite tracks
But I can't resist the rhythm as I listen to this crash
The gas tank- is a slither from empty
Im collecting penny from the ash tray, and yup, I got a plenty
Checking my investments, organizing my priorities,
Cr itically thinking whether or not I should be recording.
Phr0zen-
im bout 2 click a pencil, buckle down an wipe the thought off my head,
stead I find clickin keys quicker, 'fore I freestyle it instead,
double down like the chicken, no feathers n jus the grease,
words personify human features, that are re-enforcin my beliefs,
a steel plate of armor, on the chest, protects the heart,
the I's create binocular vision, but the lens falls apart,
see my thought on reality, passes actually,
quickly, its the swift speach, that, is my common technicality,
we can mk the fatality an let my passive actions miraculously
transform the page into museums & ancient galleries,
the outside world makes me silent,
but the iron timin has the iris widinin,
fore the violence tears us apart,
look into the future an see shards an art
in a broken mirror, that reflects my bizzare, ways,
dont ever cage the maze with age, cause days will forever praise the laid stage,
the city streets, give me a grity beat, as I daze ona grazed page,
i feel the heat speak sweet as the commities peak,
swimmin thru each ocean reef with frosted sides like mini wheats,
the beats poyzen peaks, enterin the veins 2 strain frames, as my poise is breached,
an I notice,
......my world in winter looks much more calm an distinct,
its just that..when the snow finally melts..ill remember, that i forget what Ive seen
Smooth pt2
this matches you, nice
Thank you pt2. :D
what uppp
its PhrOzen here.
Master Mao breakin the ice with me on this one. damn fresh verse on that one man, really slick lyrics. lovin the whole feel of it all.
an once again PoyzenJam rockin the usually unusual incredible beat.
Frost. is. ILL.
great job once again man
D ELeL8shun!!! hheehe keep up bro
collective consciousness
you keep it real mao, your lyrics are dope and you picked an ill beat. the opening on the beat really sets a sick tone for the track.
keep rapping man, your writing I can totally relate to
Wow, thanks man. Im glad my writing is a relevant to ya :D
Stay up
hrm
Instrumentally, this was sick.
I didn't like the first rap though, it didn't flow very well and I felt like a lot of the lines were a stretch.
The second half however, was great, but the recording didn't sound as clear.
Keep working at it. The electronics are perfect.
Thanks for droppping by SynthSky! Ya I admit my verse is a bit rushed n' my man Phr0zen got the sickest flow (just needs a better recording set up).
Stay up
great flows
i like the gritty sound to this. flows were great by both. i wouldnt mind some lyrics to read!!! I could understand, but faster flows....5/5! and downloaded for later use
Thanks bro.
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