Can't say I made a piano piece this awesome
All I have is "Finding Love in Lost Places".
This is amazing. :). good job.
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Yea I am trying a ton of new genres.. Here is a simple early rap piece. Leave comments suggestions and enjoy of course. Pretty repetitive... If any1 wants to drop some verses on this feel free. Just hit me with a PM or something.
EDIT: 12/16
TIMarbury responds:
thanks dude. this is kinda old n not so good but the melody is pretty nice
Excellent!
This piece is absolutly amazing. I really loved it. It made me feel like the situation where you wer ereliving a part of your past. Keep up the good work!
TIMarbury responds:
Thanks a lot. It does give off that feeling of reminiscing!
i love it~
very nice, it reminds me of something i've heard before, but don't remember what.
very good though. c:
TIMarbury responds:
Thanks!!
pretty decent
could mix it up alittle
TIMarbury responds:
Yea not my best stuff by far.
IDK about others, but...
I find that there is a fine line between "repetitious" and "monotonous". I think you stayed on the former side of the fence. Some songs sound like loops at points, and this is one of them, but it ain't a bad thing.
2:20-ish is a very nice break. And I like how it worked back in. :) Very nice instrumentation there.
Again, if I kenw mroe about the making, I'd try to be more helpful, but I ain't, so I can't. :)
~Sir_Furious
TIMarbury responds:
Thanks for reviewing most of my songs lol. Even if you don't know about making the song it still helps me when you give me feedback on what works and what doesn't work.
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