This entire thing sounds like one big adventure!! I really, really like this!!

i need to add a summary

hmm, im trying to give you a usefull review here if you dont mind.

the first thing that actually hits me as a 'depression' is the kick,
it isnt really great, the sounds doesnt go with it by my feeling, doesnt flow.
it could use more of a bass instead of a punch.

in other words; your kicks laggs bass.

up to my headphone *put on the headphone*

ok, the first thing i do hear is a good low bass, well done mate!
the minus point about it is that it sounds a little bit like a square, maybe it could be deeper since you introduce a piano piece further in the song.

im now flowing into your wonderfull pad, this is really good, i get the feeling i can fight the world now!

suddenly it stops, too bad it aint longer then it is xD

ok the last bits, upon to the cymbals/percs ect, they seem to be pretty standard if you would ask me, try to add some EQ's or filters/reverb, maybe some delay on some of them just to get a bit of a flow.

well, i hope my review isnt too bad, i tryed my best to explain what i could be better in my opinion.

please pm me when youve finished it :)
idl ike to hear what you will do with it.

goodluck!

`-' Timo.