Took an old one that bothered me every time I listened to it
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/337806
Skip to 1:08 to skip annoyingly long intro.
I tried a new thing with the little interlude.
Sorry if the base is too high. I have a weak base, both in my earbuds and eardrums. I should probably go to the doctor to get that cotton swab out of my ear. It's been in there 2+ weeks. In my good ear too.
Hmm..
The bass is high? I think its roughly okay..
I like the melodies you put, they work well with this song.
Honestly, you should try and make the kick more punchy. It sounds too bassy now, doing so will really help. Eq the bass and treble higher, leave the mids lower.
Still, great job on this.
This was good, but...
It need's to be a little more louder, eh?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Skarik 
