Score: 8
"Good stuff, long intro"
date: December 4, 2005
I'm not a fan of the genre ordinarily, but you pulled this one off pretty well. Good development of a theme, and good variations make for a satisfying piece. Good work.
On the negative side, it seems like the synth-voice sometimes enters a little bit off the beat. This may be intentional, but I think the piece would have more of a driving rhythm if all the parts were completely in sync with each other -- like a juggernaut.
Also, the piece takes a little longer than I would have like to really get going. You might be able to crop out a few measures from the very beginning -- particularly before when the closed hi-hat part comes in -- to jumpstart the listener earlier.
Very good.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I was not sure if I should have made it shorter so I didn't and looking at it I think I should have.