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Nov 6, 2010 | 10:17 AM EDT
File Info
2.6 MB
2 min 15 sec
2.56 / 5.00

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Rated 2.56 / 5 stars
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456 Plays | 34 Downloads
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Electronic - House

Author Comments

The real song doesn't start until 25 seconds, so please at least wait that long. Also, tell me what you think. I'm new at this and could use some advice.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


I don't see what's wrong, it seems like a good song
I gave it a 5 to equalize the score :)

Ninjamurai responds:

Lol, been a while since I looked at this one. Suprised anyone still looks at this old stuff. Thanks, but looking back on it I do see a lot I could have done better. Maybe since you liked it I'll go back and redo it.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Here's my take on it.

I think that your main melody didn't flow well (as in the notes just hurt the ears). Also the melody doesn't seem to flow unless the beats with it. The kicks should stay consistent and the cymbals are too loud and seem to drown out other parts. The ending of the song with the eurogate would be solid to have throughout the song, and that flows better overall. 6/10 3/5


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

k advice

how about you stick to the beat, and dont use too many sounds. edit the sounds too, so it doesent look like you are just taking it from somewhere.

Ninjamurai responds:

That's almost exactly what the other guy said. Maybe when I get the full program I'll do a re-edit. Thanks for the advice, I need all I can get.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


the only thing I can suggest you is to not change the beat. Mabye the sound for the melody isn't the best. And it is a bit monotone.

Ninjamurai responds:

Thank! I've been waiting for someone to finally give me some advice, since I've had no idea what is wrong!!!