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Nov 4, 2010 | 6:41 PM EDT
File Info
3.7 MB
4 min 1 sec
2.20 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.20 / 5 stars
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456 Plays | 30 Downloads
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Electronic - Ambient

Author Comments

Another slow-building song to a dirty climax using traditional instruments.
Will be featured on a minialbum called We're Better Off Alone

Check out my other track Woe&Sorry if you liked this!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I want to like this.

The sound quality is very nice, and the melody is pretty good, up to a point.

The main trouble with the song is a lack of cadence. You make the listener wait too long to hear you resolve back to the tonic.

Instead of a calming affect - which the sound of the instrument was betraying - I found myself gritting my teeth.

KNIGHTMAREcomics responds:

I don't think the lack of Cadence is a problem but the song lacks another dimension which seems to slow the progression.. it either needs another guitar part and more instruments and/or a riff that pops up now and again.
I will get to work on it soon.