Chimy!

My second mentor :D
Well all i really have to say to fix is the percussion. That, and a louder bass.
Songs like this need a term i came up with called Rejecting Bass.
Its when a bass kind of takes over for a song when the lead isnt present, and when it is present it enhances the lead entirely. Dont ask how i got the name, as i just sounded cool at the moment. The percussion need a change because io felt as though it didnt agree with the song. Overall i give an 8.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

Absolutely beautiful..

I think I've heard the original before, it was a seriously long time ago.
This is an awesome version of this song, I like the way you totally changed it to trance.
The beat is great, like how it makes me want to get up and dance..
I just feel this song could have some extra high end, all the instruments seem to be crowding at the low mid section, which really muddles up the sound. Some higher pitched instruments will work well, such as strings or sawtooth-based synths..
But meh, that's just personal preference.
Still, great job!