I'm sorry, erm, but, just no, it sounded like you just mashed a bunch of random horrible noises together and called it music. There's no flow, no beat, no rhythm....when I listen to GOOD music or even Decent music, I can imagine something, the name made me think it'd be an awesome dubstep hardcore, but this, this is just garbage, I'm sorry but it's true. If this is your first made song I understand but, really, this, just no, nothing came to my head, not one image came to my head. and I'm very creative, (some times twisted)