could be better!
its got potential. ok the synth thing at :32 is just bleh. either get rid of it or make it sound better. hmm if you could maybe slow down the entire song just a little bit. especially 1:03 the epic trumpet part or w/e it is. i dont really like your drums either. they are too loud i think. maybe lower the volume down on them. i like it but needs to be redone! :]