Calm..

Awesome..
I think this will make a really great trance intro, you really built up energy well.
I just find the beginning was a bit too slow, but it ended well.
Synths don't really get introduced well, maybe fading them in and out will help a lot.
The song is also a bit bass heavy, you might want to lower the bass in the final version.
If you can build this up into a really epic trance tune, the song would be great!
Aw man, i just love the ambient pads you put into this..

(and ignore the previous review. It is a troll o.o)

need to strain harder

not gonna smell alot if it's not strained