'Nuff said...
I don't think more can be said than what has already been said, but if you do what he says you better post it. Also, I hope your not getting bored of reading all this construcitve criticism I've posted around your work! <(^_~)>
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This is a redo of my song "Let's Celebrate!". I've added a counter-melody and changed some other levels to make it sound better. Input on how it is would be GREAT and ENCOURAGED! I'd like to know how to make it better and not so repetitive as the original was. Enjoy and God Bless!
I have a few suggestions...
-At the end of that (intense) drum roll build up... variate the drums at the end.
a good example (and no I am not trying to promote anything) would be "Static Shock (ID:329416). At 0:16 it has the same type of drum roll but with the nice variation i am talking about at the end.
-Also add another bass line or just bring up the one you have already
-And MOST importantly... that main tune you play through the entire song... (i mean you at least tried to change keys) but that needs to break out into your main melody (something new) after the drum roll.
-oh yeah... and at 1:24 build that up with some drum thing like the roll again and EXPLODE with epicness :D (heavy bass=necessary)
...other than that this is an excellent building block for a MASTERPIECE...
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