Great work!
Wow, this is awesome! Great job! Sure, it could use some "polishing up" here and there, like you said, but, damn! For a first song, this is awesome! WAYYY better than my first song. Hahaha... Anyways, this is really great! I guess synth choice could have been a little better, and the bass synth is kind of cool how it changes tone or whatever, but it's kind of too loud, so the main synth isn't as prominent as it should be. But, wow, the beats were AMAZING (beats are a real challenge for me, so props to you on this one) and this song had some really nice parts :). Great job! :D