pretty decent song
i give this... toaster/10
Author Comments
New song?
Had A Hard Time
I had a very hard time listening to the whole song. I don't think you realize this, but the NAME OF THE SONG IS VERY IMPORTANT. "That Toaster" isn't the greatest name in the world.
On to the song. It's good. Decent, everything was moderate. You might want to make the transition shorter, and more smooth. It was a little too long to my likings. I love the way everything was placed. The tune isn't great (it's not your fault, most aren't) but you made it sound extraordinary and professional. Nice work!
OpenLight responds:
I uploaded this spontaneously. I didn't care to even put the real version up, haha. This is the "mixed up" version that I sent to people. I have the real version in FL Studio and I'm still working with it. I was just hoping to get some helpful criticism to assist me in working with it. Unfortunately, so far all of the comments are about the random name I used instead of putting "WIP."
Ha, anyway, I'll let you know once I do something else with the real song.
lol
xDlolol
OpenLight responds:
roflmao bbq XPXPXP
Decent!
Can't really complain about it. Though the only thing I want to ask is where does the toaster part come in? Lols
OpenLight responds:
Ha, as I put in another comment, that was just a placeholder. I have a real version of the song (that doesn't have distorted flute, :( unfortunately) in the works, and this was just thrown together to see how people felt about the melody and transitions.
Also, this song is a slower song, so most people who listen to my stuff will probably not like this as much, since most of my songs are upbeat and energetic.
Thanks for the review!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 956
- Votes
- 5
- Score
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3.72 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Oct 8, 2010
- 6:50 PM EDT
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 4.9 MB
- 4 min 17 sec
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