Your first song?
Hahahah thats a joke.. cause this song is crazy good for your first song.. like.. really really good.. my first song was like a 5 second loop of random notes xD not much i can say here.. learn how to master better and to make your mix better.. once you get those things down. your music starts to sound way more professional.. look up tutorials on google or youtube on those things.. it will really get you far! I can see you becoming a really big musician.. keep it up man.. stay with the techno.. it sounds like you are best at it :) congrats
~Jason