Okay but...
I really like the drums and orchestral you have going on, as well as the dark and ominous feel. However, it just seems like its lacking motion. The chanting noises also are kind of annoying too. My recommendation would be to add a little bit of attack to the filter cutoff or something to not make them so weird sounding.
Ill be interested to see where you go with this.
Cheers,
CA