Could be much better
It is only good after 1:30. Before that, it sounds very generic, almost to the point of boring me and making me switch to something else before 1:30, which I obviously would have regretted.
Also, I think that the part beginning at 1:30 could use more instrumentality. You do add a few more instruments after 1:58, but still it's not enough. I would have liked to see it progressing to become ever more complex and intense, instead you kill it off at 2:12. This would be fine to do, if only it would pick up from where you left off later, which never actually happens. Me not happy.