The ending could use some more loop-savvy work. But the main body is perfect. There is several ways to go about it, but the easiest, would be to keep the arpreggio strings going and have them playing at 0:00 - to 0:09 too, just to keep it cohesive. Hope you found the feedback handy!

This is quite impressive!!! Wow i can picture like some army veterans walking down a hill waving the american flag in the air in slow motion on some victory sh*t! Haha

Its been 9 years since you made a track, ever thought about getting back into it? No lie i can see somebody sampling this and turning it into an epic hip hop track but thats just my opinion tho haha. Good work tho even for a 2010 project.

I can see the "Gearing up" in a future based setting. But if you put in a mid evil based settling you git the "Line up" and the "Steady March" settling. But still great work.

This is a pretty good song. i was wondering if i could use it as intro music for my channel as i was thinking of doing a strategy game, and i thought this would be some brilliant music for it. please reply as soon as you see this, thank you.

~Blockie

this is so powerful. i loved it , i can so see this in an intense movie! i loved your use of percussion. fantastic