Hey this is nice :)

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this is really great, its got a really ketchy tune and a impresive beat, it really makes you get into the song... 5/5 10/10 :)

Nice job!

Really digging the melodies. Nice, full sounds as well. The bass is punchy without being omnipresent, and I like that hi hat. What I would say you need to work on the most are your buildups. At 1:24, the song was off and running before I even realized it. If you tease your listeners a little more, it'll make that kick entrance all the more satisfying. Also, when you seem to take a breather from 2:19 to 3:01, I think there needs to be some percussive presence there. In my (very) humble opinion, trance is a genre that should keep your head bobbing the whole way through, and part of that is having a kick, hi hat, snare, clap, mousetrap, something that audibly keeps the beat. The crescendo that kicks in at 3:01 is a good effort, but it's a little wussy for my taste, mainly because that snare is weaksauce. It doesn't cut through like I'd expect.

Last teensy criticism: this song has a lot of high voicing without a low counterbalance. I can hear your bassline, but it's about 2 octaves too high. You've got plenty on the high side as it is. Drop some of that stuff down and you've got yourself a winner.

You've got the foundation for a great song here. Just give it a little more attention. 3/5 7/10