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Sep 21, 2010 | 1:41 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
3 min 50 sec
Score
4.27 / 5.00

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Rated 4.27 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

I actually got this beat from this site (the beat is by T-Free.) lol. the origional track is called 'ill be there' and i think i did pretty good with it

*lyrics*

i go to sleep in the daytime
i go to sleep when the sun comes up
i couldnt be in my right mind
its like im legallly insane i cant stop from feelin like im bleeding in the brain

im losin focus stupid music joke shit hocus pocus poof and its dope shit
but im still feelin broken even hopeless but when you see me i be cloakin
now the feelin of erosion feelin like im slowly bein hurt from an ocean
and sometimes it feels like its an explosion one blast done fast and im open
thoughts, songs, words on every street
im caught in the wrong on the curb of every beat but i was
taught to be strong when the burn is gettin me
like a bird i shouldnt be runnin from worms who isnt free
i should be flyin in the sky and in the clouds
and even when im tryin to be lyin my head on every sound
they wanna come and let me down and i keep lettinem and settinen straight to send me down now thts why

chorus

my dad told me to go and flourish words to give me courage for sure its supposed to be easy but it served shift
i know they sposed to treat me with goodness not worthlessness but its like i got no purpose
i wanna grab the bottle of burbon and take a swallow im nervous this feelin hollow will surface i think its curtains
im discombobbled and certain this weeble wobble will work its so feeble gobbel this curse shit i dont deserve this
i should be honest i know tht i could be polished and sit in this trophy case hopeing to taste gods bliss
but my oddness and tendency to just dodge shit look heavily for erotic touch keeps me clutched in blindness
i look like you shouldnt judge the cover of a book like my brother ima cook a recipe for destiny
and when i rest in peace and you know the rest of me i mean the breathless me i hope you see i never meant to leave
but i was caught in the air see your the ocean and you know im damn good at drownin i know you cant get around this
and you werent plannin on the foundin of bein lost and prepared
its simple but i didnt notice it i wasnt crippled naw i just needed to get over it
and now i grip on how the rope will fit im hopin it isnt tight enough to choke my throat with it

chorus

Reviews


BaggyLabBaggyLab

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing.

This is amazing. The chorus is great and your flow is dope, plus the beat is ill. Lyrics are great too.



s0lars0lar

Rated 5 / 5 stars

PlaySHIFT

You are just: good.
BRILLIANT.
I am a fan.
This is awesome.
Can I use this in a tutorial I am making?


playshift responds:

thanks. and yeah np just send me it when youre done. i like to keep tabs on everything my songs are used in.


BeOzHazBeOzHaz

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very good can you put lyrics?! :D

Whoa i downloaded. :D



cybervegeto22cybervegeto22

Rated 5 / 5 stars

...:|

LMFAO when the song started playing. Then the verse dropped and it was like, wow, how have I not heard of you before??



GucunukaGucunuka

Rated 5 / 5 stars

holy shit

LOve IT