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Sep 19, 2010 | 4:18 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.4 MB
3 min 46 sec
Score
4.20 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.20 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
2,190 Plays | 245 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - General Rock
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Author Comments

Another new one, enjoy!

Reviews are wanted and appreciated! Thanks!

Reviews


Phoenix145Phoenix145

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome job!

You did a great job with this, I would of liked to hear more of the piano and/or the bass drum a little louder, but it's not enough to effect the 10/10 and the 5/5
Keep up the good work and keep on rocking!


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sin30vendetta responds:

Thanks for the review! We may start using the piano a bit more. Sounds nice.

-s30v


JohnsLotJohnsLot

Rated 4 / 5 stars

well pulled off

This track's fairly intricate and it sounds clean and professional, I can hear all the different instruments well. The vox were the least interesting part to me only because they sound a lot like standard pop-punk (Blink 182 and such). The rest is sick and quite original.


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sin30vendetta responds:

I disagree with the vox comment. Usually we respond to anything constructive but that was just ignorant lol


sjs00sjs00

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great!

Hold your breath if you're sleeping and you're not alone.

This song was very emotional as you probably intended it to be, and it gives me salvation in a quite complicated way actually. Truth is, the reason you were getting a 9/10, but still 5/5, is because you didn't write the lyrics in your author's comment. My only complaint, and since its not really related to the song itself, you still get a 10/10.

Intro/Outro: Really digged the sound of the guitar and synths in the intro, and the outro was pretty abrupt but hey, the solo was fitting so its all good.

Lyrics: Really liked the chorus, could relate to it well. This reminds me of many of them women I try to converse with, (and fail miserably) and what I would be like if a long term relationship with a woman came to a close.

Beat/SFX: Liked the piano and the guitar (I think) in the intro then the electric that kicks in after the bass, all in all, this segment is pretty badass.

Conclusion: I really love this song, and after listening to it for a couple of days I've had a bit of a self-esteem when it comes to girls, thanks for that, but alas, it will probably still be a while. But hey, this is something to be proud of, and I'm sure you are.

Other:
-In the Intro, you may want to raise the initial volume of the piano and guitar as the first time I heard this song it was on my speakers and I turned up the volume to hear the Intro better, then got blasted with (awesome) electrical guitar high notes, which was unpleasant, as my internet glitched out for a second and the end-result was about 5 seconds of super loud ass music that blasted my eardrums. It hurt.

But, anyway, great work here, until next time!
Sjs00-


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sin30vendetta responds:

You're the dark shade, colored perfection
sweet like silver, and faded red.

Keep it close, like a heart-shaped metaphor
take my hand, keep your eyes pointed t'wards the floor.
Hold your breath, if you're seeking then you're not alone
This is everything to me, let me let you go.

Violet Girl, you've got my candle lit,
it's nothing personal, you're just so hard to quit.
You're so down, with whats been killing me,
This is a side of me, you know you've never see.

Was it drab hype? Shy like an angel,
storm to my grey skies, perfect and in fade

Keep it close, like a heart-shaped metaphor
take my hand, keep your eyes pointed t'wards the floor.
Hold your breath, if you're seeking then you're not alone
This is everything to me, let me let you go.

[Chorus]

Keep it close, like a heart-shaped metaphor
take my hand, keep your eyes pointed t'wards the floor.
Hold your breath, if you're seeking then you're not alone
This is everything to me, let me let you go.

Keep it close, like a heart-shaped metaphor
take my hand, keep your eyes pointed t'wards the floor.
Hold your breath, if you're seeking then you're not alone
This is everything to me, let me let you go.

Violet Girl, you've got my candle lit,
it's nothing personal, you're just so hard to quit.
You're so down, with whats been killing me,
This is a side of you, that i've never seen.

[Repeat]

;) Hope that helps! Thanks for the review!

-s30v


computerwhizzcomputerwhizz

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very nice

Loved every part of this, lyrics very nice and fit well with the music. Because i'm generous 10/10 I'll keep an eye out for new submissions from you.


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sin30vendetta responds:

Thanks for the kudos!

Hopefully we'll get some more out soon!

-s30v


virtuaghostvirtuaghost

Rated 5 / 5 stars

solo

wow, now that solo remind me of some 90s video game show music or something, 10 for the solo.


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sin30vendetta responds:

Thanks! The solo at first seemed a little out of place to us, but it grew on us a lot.

Thank ya for the review! We love to please.

-s30v