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Sep 19, 2010 | 11:02 AM EDT
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4.8 MB
4 min 12 sec
Score
4.15 / 5.00

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Rated 4.15 / 5 stars
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1,057 Plays | 70 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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made and mixed in logic

lemme know what you think hope you enjoy it

thanks for listening

Verse 1
My minds bent and spines tense
cuz ive spent too much time standing in line
hence the divine rhyme
when crooked and parallel lines intertwine and its fine
deviate ourselves from the crime
the lackness of the kind/ the hatred that it binds
we're all left behind paralyzed and blind
we're equal
at least i thought thats what the plan was
talk a little different fellow man no longer stand us
pay attention through these stanzas
no self promotion give a f*** who the man was
or man is cuz im prayin like a mantis
that evil spirits vanish, my paranoid panics still persistent
yet i unveil no resistance
swallow pride hide the anger keep the ignorance distant
for instance
mr know it all is on my balls, its all my fault the deal is off
shoulda called him the problems solved
but the problem lies up in his jaw
one more step ima knock it off
blast his face like a shotgun sawed but hes just talk i walk it off
i walk it off because the ignorance is bliss
give a homeless man three dollars while he finds an ass to kiss
or an ass to pinch
probably a sadomasochist
id give away all money just to share my scripts

Hook
We are always wrong and they are always right
and it makes you wanna fight possibly take a life
well put your hands up
if you know they can't stand us

Verse 2
This rhyme has lost its divine intentions
im not bruce wayne fighting crime and henchman
and i should mention that the dimes im pinchin
from the bags are dispensin from kinsman (f***)
who are my friends then
people in my car nearly crash and then binge
the sin we've been in has been of the hinges
but gettin back to the grind heeds them no interest
see...it is a game of inches
stay awake stay alert show them no flinchin
they lack a conscious and its so gut wrenchin
but thats no excuse for you to put the clip in
I understand why'd you wanna brush these words off
f*** that motherf***er chainsaw to his dang jaw
smash it in his brains raw
tell me who's insanse dogg
yeah your insane dogg lemme guess its my fault

Hook

Verse 3

I know that you don't give a fuck, now im on my tough shit
pocket full of razor blades, now im on my cut shit
bitch u better duck quick half these blades are rusted
aiming for your face slicing tongues and bicuspids
not a dental hygienist but a menace whos bout to finish all opponents until their spirits diminish
pretenders say contenders but the blind can see who isnt
uncage my rage no longer hidden victims no hospital livin
this rhymes got me feelin so despicable
the f***s think they're invincible, i see through their principles
so we call them invisible, f*** that noise get physical
judgin me was a mistake and very critical
i had a bad day now im stabbin for fun
but that don't ease my pain so i loaded a gun
and i knew it was dumb
as i stared up at the sun
and put it in between my lungs
and counted
321

Reviews


UselessTalentUselessTalent

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty dope

Beat could be a lil louder but this aint a bad track.
Lyrics and hook esp is tight

You;ve got the clearest recordings Ive heard on this fucking site.

What kind of mic do you gots?



MickeyMaoMickeyMao

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Ya got something!

The rhymes and lyricism are insane. The hook is catchy and relative to the overall feel to the entire track.

The only suggestion I'd have is on the abundent rhyme scheme. With so much variations of a rhyme word, it get a bit predictable. But it also sets a nice pace in the verses. You know?

Im liking what Im hearing, Ill keep an ear out for some new Jweed tracks.

Keep at it!


JayWeed responds:

good lookin thanks man!


juggaloalldayjuggaloallday

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hmmmm

Its good, but you can tell your tying to hard. Plus you take A lot of lines from other people....

That whole enitire eminem "devil" line...
Add heart and youll be great......
One of the best things i could have leanred was this " Do what you know. Dont go trying to be something youe not"

Ok now to the chorus..... Sing it more .... put heart into it, and it would sound sick

Maybe we could colab one time......
Hit me up.......



DJMattiDJMatti

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Spirit man.

You need more spirit. Rap with more rage, at least words rage more than your voice.



RemixF2DRemixF2D

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Real good.

Like this fam. Love the hook. mabie lower the vocals a bit or bring the beat up. Lyrics are sick. Keep moving and youll go somewhere. hell yea. 5/5 10/10
Stay up.
PEace!

~Rymix


JayWeed responds:

Thanks man, I have such a hard time mixing this will help me for later appreciate it dude thanks for the insight