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Date
09/11/2010
File Info
Loop
431.5 KB
28 sec
Score
3.69 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.69 / 5 stars
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135 Plays | 25 Downloads
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Author Comments

After my previous li'l project, I figured I should make a light hearted tune you could imagine hearing during a tutorial or short explanation or whatever. I'm not a skilled composer, and thus, I would enjoy reading reviews with detailed critique on how to imrprove.

Reviews


JohnLeprechaunJohnLeprechaun

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 11, 2010

Well,

This song has very little potential in my opinion. If I were you, I would just start over. However, if you really want to stick with it, here are my suggestions: Add some kind of effect to the piano. It sounds very flat and emotionless as it is. I suggest a little reverb and some EQ. Secondly, experiment with some different basses. I understand that a piano can stand alone, but if you want it to serve its purpose as a tutorial loop, then some more variation is definitely necessary. I hope this helps.


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Mariofan9 responds:

I see.
It is a pretty empty sounding tune, isn't it? I'll experiment with your suggested effects in my next project.
Thanks for the critique.