A little too soft in the sound

The tempo sounded pretty good, but the entire thing overall was a little too soft, making it not very hearable if it were to go into a movie and someone's watching it with crappy speakers. It also repeated itself during the beginning and middle parts too. But I'd have to say I liked the near-ending part. Sounded like a piece from "Move it" (think "I like to move it, move it). So it wasn't a great audio but it wasn't near bad.

Not bad..

One thing I could suggest is to add some sort of pad to add more depth to your song.

Slow your drums down too- they take away from the mood.
And don't be afraid to throw a supporting melody on top of what you have going already. Alternating between the melodies makes for nice dynamics.

Otherwise- keep at it. You can only get better.
I mean, listen to my old stuff and compare it to my new stuff.