Trying to get a feel for electronic action songs / sequences. Sometimes I don't know how to end songs and what to do after a certain point. Any input is highly encouraged as I really want to make game, and perhaps movie composition my living in the future. If something sucks, should be changed or needs work, let me know but please...be constructive!
Very impressive!
This is a very strong piece! At first I wasn't sure what to make of the slower bass beat, but once it pulls together around the 30 second and 2 minute mark, it makes more sense as a slow, determined piece as opposed to a rushed sense of action. All in all, very good stuff. If I have one criticism, your work could use a break from synth; try to inject some strings and wind into your work if at all possible.
Nice Beat
Nice Beat man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
hotsacoman 
