i like the melody

butt for critisizm when it comes to the parts where there is that heavy kick, which is a good sounding kick just you have way to much compression, it blocks out the melody. but if you fixed that and the extra 10 secs of nothing at the beginning, this would be a decent song.

good luck

/A-W/

good job

nice work on a bit of a build up at the start and a work down at the end there though seems like first and last 10sec is soundless unless i just need to turn volume up or plug a headset in, in all good job on the song there keep it up