I labeled this dubstep because it actually has some dubstep in it, but it's mostly reggae/techno lol.
Ahh, there's the drop!!!
The song has a cool drop and a cool theme, but it takes WAY to long to get to the drop. Have that intro go for about 30 seconds, maybe a little more, and then throw in the bass drop right then. It gets boring with the drop at the end.
I hear what you're saying, but I wanted to take a different approach and focus on the instrumentals. All its missing is some lyrical influence, delays, variation with the drums and the defaults, and more to the drop lol. Thanks for the input!
real chill
pretty chill
But I don't like the fact you left the dirty basslines till half way into the movie, cause I woulda fallen asleep. other than that pretty good song.
I say edit this song a little bit and if you do, PM me a link :)
I agree. The bass should have dropped sooner considering it's dubstep, but I wanted to make a song instead of a truly repetitive dub. Thanks for the critique :D
yaa mannn
yaa man bring in to da jamehcan staile! only comment i have is that the piano kinda puts it off theme in the middle. other than that awesome track
Thanks! I agree, but at the same time this is a song meant for some vocal input. I wanted to extend the softer parts and drop towards the end. Someday I'll finish it :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
MaryLovesJane 
