NIN Meets 1932
Overall I like this, but it feels very sloppy. There is an amazing musical idea hidden in here. It's very interesting. To me, it sounds like Nine Inch Nails meets the 1930's. Like that movie "O' Brother Where Art Though"
I really look forward to a version of this with cleaner guitar and vocals. I know from some of your other stuff you CAN sing better than this. I think was just rushed a bit.
All in all, I'll stick to what I keep saying about you, your a talented musician and have great potential. How you use that potential is all up to you, but I see good in your music.
4/5 8/10
-Angelus