This seems extremely random, like you never stopped to take a step back and looking at the whole picture. I'm guessing the electro-metal sound was what you were going for though.

The mixing's pretty poor, the track feels extremely flat, and quickly gets somewhat repetitive, even though there is actual variation in the track, it all just sounds mostly the same.

Definitely the best thing you've submitted so far.

Now go make something EVEN BETTER!!! :D