An outro for an album I never made, figured I may as well put it to use.
Not bad...to improve
First off, turn down the bass just a notch or two. Second, add some more variety to the song. I found myself fast forwarding to find changes in tempo and atmosphere. Still it sounds like music to me, so don't give up on making stuff altogether. Good effort.
Cheers man. I was going to down the bass a lot (I know you were being polite :P) but the base file I had for it is missing, so I really couldn't go back to make any changes.
Variety/dynamics is something I'm still getting better at; always had trouble not just repeating certain sections.
Thanks for the positive criticism. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
BrodWizard 
