my apathy ascending

lol, "in progress" folder. Thats a nice way to put it. I just have a "scrap" folder. Whatever goes in there usually never comes back out.

Anyway, this song. man...it feels messy and choppy. Like at 1:12. Also, in the very begging, it's so choppy I was a little confused as to what I was even hearing at first. It sounds so synthetic. Like this is what a metal song would sound like if it were made by a computer. No real drums, no real guitar, no real strings, no real bass. Remember back in the 90's, whenever you would go to a website and a little midi song would play in the background? That's what this reminds me of.

I know I'm being mean and shit, but whatever. I see you worked really hard to put this together and you had a lot of good ideas, like that "guitar" solo you've got in there. You obviously know what you're doing, but the technology isn't keeping up and it sounds disjointed. Keep making music, dude. Don't stop.