it's okay.

It's okay, but i have to agree that it's more like a gameboy or genesis game boss fight soundtrack. it is almost a cheery song. also, the thing that comes in around around 20 is really anoying. i suggest using a different instrument. You have potential, but you really didn't hit the spooky part ( you got the light thing around 35) the comment bleow me said most of it.

again u have potential, so keep at it.

ya know...

I really recommend using reason 3.0... The song itself is short, the keys and bass didn't harmonize right. And where's the creepy part? I'm listening to this right now and this sounds more like a boss fight in a video game. The high pitch keys get really annoying. Perhaps if you're really shooting for the creepy factor is to slow the next project down to about 100-110 BPM and generate some really hollow sfx, like you're in a forest in the middle of the night. After that, generate a low bassline and low piano riffs to harmonize. THis would be good if it were in the video game area instead of misc. Just consider what you're doing the next time and ask yourself what the final edit sounds like and where it goes. Keep trying.

-SD-