NICE!
Kick. ass. song.
Although, (being an asshole here, sorry XD) singing coulda been better..
All that considered, the actual song is fucking awesome, keep that shit up man!
\M/
Author Comments
I redid the vox and added background lyrics. Original version's on my FlameMesial account.
fuck yeeeeeah matherfacker!
kick ass... vocals were overblown, but you knew that already... other than that this song kicks ass.
I-Will-Defy responds:
Cheers dood!!
YEAH
Man, that shit kicked ass too!!!FUCKING AWESOME!
That was good
That was pretty fucking good, but the vocals were clear in some parts, and then muffled in others. And they were a bit too loud. The guitars and everything were good, I heard the original. My future songs are going to have vocals, starting with My Sickness, (which is going to be changed to Your Sickness due to lyrics.) What do you use for the drums, I really like that sound. And what guitar do you use. Anyways good job dude, those lyrics are fucking ace.
-Demon_Slayer12-
I-Will-Defy responds:
Yeah sorry about the loudness, I got carried away at times and held the mic too close to my gob.
I'd love to hear your vocals in your future songs, they should kick arsebiscuits.
The drums came from my drum machine (not a program) called BOSS Dr.Rhythm DR670. If you would like to see it, copy and paste this web adress into your web browser:
http://www.instrumentguide.com/drum%20machines/boss/dr670%20dr.%20rhythm/big.jpg
The drums from my drummy machine are brilliant. The guitar I use normally is a B.C.Rich Bronze Warlock, because of a great sound. I plug my B.C.Rich into a BOSS MT2 Metal Zone pedal, then through my POD, and finally into my computer.
I haven't printed the extra lyrics here yet, so I'll do it now (all lyrics in brackets are the new lyrics in the background):
Trapped, confined in my mind
Confusion, delusion, is only what I find
I’m accidentally fucking up my brain
Cramped in here makes me insane
I’m a hostage of my own thoughts
Falling into my dreams
Dreams in here are reality
Anything can happen
(What I fear is what I see; I’ll be gone in humanity)
Things that I can’t even imagine
Forever chasing me, haunting me
Filled with paranoia inside
Vast possibilities of dying severed deaths
Severed from my arms
Severed from my legs
Severed from my torso
Severed from my organs
Severed from my senses
Severed from my feelings
Severed from existence
Severed from my life
What I feared as a child
Is certain to arise (arise)
What I hated in my mind
Will surely come to life
You don’t know just how it feels
To be in what you cannot feel
In you this cannot be real
But to me it is
Perpetual torment
Eternal agony
Distress
(Distress)
Distress
I’m a hostage of my own thoughts
Falling into my dreams
Dreams in here are reality
And so are nightmares
(What I fear is what I see; what I fear in front of me)
What I feared as a child
Is stood in front of me
Now I see a hideous fiend
And I’ve got nowhere to hide
(Doomed, Doomed)
So my epitaph is written
As this beast approaches me
Now I sing the song of hope
And I pray to my God
Aaaagh…
Cheers Demon Slayer.
Sweet
Sounds a lot clearer with the new mic.You just need to level everything out.Overall kick ass remake and I'm glad you submitted something again.Sorry for the shitty review but I just woke up.Cool song.
I-Will-Defy responds:
I haven't started recording again, I just quickly recorded the vox again while my family was out.
Cheers Speedmetal.
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