Alien Encounter

The blue skinned figure floated through the woods, peering out into the clearing ahead. Birds sang all around him, as sunshine wondered throughout the valley. He focused, and could make out chanting not far away from where he was standing. He touched his hands against the ground to feel their vibrations. "ALL HAIL EMPEROR GOLIATH! ALL BOW DOWN TO HIS NEVER ENDING TRIUMPH! WE SHALL OBEY HIS COMMANDS! OUR LIFES ARE HIS TO CONTROL! ALL BOW DOWN TO HIS GLORY!"

These words shot through the earth beneath him. He clutched his hand and zoomed forwards through the forest.

"ALL BOW DOWN!" they chanted in the sand. The leader of the group was in the front wearing a golden shirt laced with emeralds and silver. He held a sword in his left hand, and a gun sheathed in his belt. He chanted with these soliders as they marched under the heat. Suddenly, a man in the back of the group screamed as his arms were ripped to shreds. He fell to the ground below, blood trailing underneath him. Soldiers around stared in confusion and awe for a second, until they to were ripped to bits.

Chaos emerged from the party, and the man in the front cowered in fear, not even touching his over glorified sword. The brave attempted to swing at the air that seemed to be killing their comrades, but only succeed in having their jugulars but open and their necks broken. When just a few were left, moments later, a blue figure stood around them. It looked at them, wearing a large black cloak. He shot his arms outwards, and lightning engulfed the terrain around them.

Everyone dropped to the ground in puddles of blood. The figure nodded his head in satisfaction, and moved deeper into the dessert.

Not too shabby

There are some flaws, but this is a pretty good track.

I think you should re-categorize it, because I don't really feel the Drum n Bass. There's no real oomph to it, which is pretty necessary when it comes to DnB.

It's a really dreamy track. It makes me feel pretty good. It's ratehr fast paced, which is fitting for the genre. The intro is rather slow, a slow build-up with some sort of subliminal messages in the back to hint towards what's about to come. I think the sudden burst of sound and speed might be abit too sudden.

You're also having some problems keeping it varied. THe background backing sounds are very repetitive, as are the rhythms. The melody is very good, but it's somehow overshaded by the repetitive buzzing sound in the back, which carries on for the length of the song.

Review Request Club

Ambient

Yet it had a jungle type theme, it was a really good song although I'm not too sure about what it is meant for as I think it's too fast for a game or a ringtone so it has left me to ponder.
Killer song though.
Sarah xxx

thread

hey dude i read ur topic/thread about u not getting enough feedback or something but i think ur great and should keep producing music. its just that ur music isnt very exciting but its great video game music.

you did it!

for a 15 year old thiz stuff iz great!