Also eh...
I pretty much agree with floatingmagictree guy.
It is pretty generic. It's sort of like using a sine wave for everything (I know you don't, but this is just an example). Try and put some sprinkles on top of the cake, add some pizazz if you know what I mean. I know what kind of sound you're going for, but I just know you can make it better :)
Overall, it was... different!