Very interesting

I gotta say, this is a very interesting track, but it really does drag on. A lot.

Did you use overdubbing? If so, you did it really good, as it sounded like a group of people singing. Really like your voice as well. The a capella part of the song, the intro and the way the vocals just carried on really worked out well. The clapping also followed well, and the song could've sound very naked if you'd left it out. Especially when there was no guitar.

The guitar parts were okay, nothing spectacular, but it fit the song and the vocals well.

The only problem I have with this song is that it's about three minutes too long. Seeing as there's so little variation, it gets really boring really fast. There is some variation in the guitar, but that's barely anything. The intro lasts for over a minute, before the guitar joins in, and the outro is also very slow, but at least here there's some variation in the vocals. Also, you've used a fade-out, which I find to be a cheap way of ending songs.

If you could shorten this or add more variation, it could've gotten a better score. You should at least work on something similar to this, because I find it pretty interesting and would love to hear more in the same style.

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Drug songs rock

0:25-you finally start adding the guitar and clapping,which it sounded awesome.I started clapping by myself in my room alone.It was kinda sad.It got repetitive
2:05-It starts to finally slow down which made me wander whats next
3:05-guitar stops and I just hear clapping which it kinda reminded me of a church choir.
3:30-The clapping and voices get quieter
3:55-more quieter
4:05-Some guy talking
4:06-crazy noises start happening
4:20-they start to get louder
4:35-Quiet again
5:10-just clapping
5:17-End of song

-Song-
It was very repetitive.Like VERY.This song could of been 2 and a half minutes or at least 3 but nearly 5 and a half is way to long.When you took out the guitar I started to lose interest.

points...
Vocals-1/2
Guitar parts-2
Clapping-1 1/2
My but was moving-4
Repetitive- -1
Overall=7

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Funny but weird

nice beat although it does sound weird and the beats way too repetitive. The beat does slightly change over time however which is good and it is a relaxing tune so i'll give you a 7 and a 4 in the ratings! Good luck!

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