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Date
07/20/2010
File Info
Song
4.8 MB
5 min 17 sec
Score
4.01 / 5.00

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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Fabricated Son
Words and music written and performed by Jesse Sicinski ©2010

They're going to text you a message,
Sent down from corporate satellites,
"You better tune in on Sunday,
If you want to see something really cool"
This viral message circled twice around the globe,
Infecting everyone around,
And so we gathered by the pixelated glow,
With burning curiosity,

Run, run, run, cause the fabrics come undone,
With the setting of the sun, we're all going down,
So everybody run cause the end's about to come,
Soon the fabricated son will be knocking at your door,
They synthesized our own demise in the image of a desecrated saviour,
So hypnotized by this disguise, on and on his slaves are lined up for confession,

Stare into your crystal screens with frozen souls and silent screams,
He's marked you, and soon shall come,

So you better grab your crucifix,
And squeeze it so hard it draws blood from your palms,
Cause I bet you took that Sunday fix,
As tempting as it was who could ever resist?
Bow down in awe before this twisted son of man,
He's watching always, yes he is,
Media inspired nightmare dreamscapes have come true,
Share holders raise glass to the gods,

Run, run, run, cause the fabrics come undone,
With the setting of the sun, we're all going down,
So everybody run cause the end's about to come,
Soon the fabricated son will be knocking at your door,
They synthesized our own demise in the image of a desecrated saviour,
So hypnotized by this disguise, on and on his slaves are lined up for confession,

Watch their puppet work his spells and speak in tongues that reek of Hell,
Their bars and chains are wearing thin,
Broadcast live across the screens, this tragic end to corporate dreams,
Unleash the hatred of all mankind,

Run, run, run like little ants we run,
Running from the fire falling down from the sky,

Run, run, run from the hand of Christ we run,
He's laughing as the tears of blood pour down from his eyes,

Life turned to ash as he scatters the dust,
We gave into greed and we caved into lust,
He died for our sins so they burned us with trust,

Life turned to ash as he scatters the dust,
We gave into greed and we caved into lust,
He died for our sins so they burned us with trust and promises.

Reviews


BlakantBlakant

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 14, 2011

cool

awesome job! :)



nunyabiznessnunyabizness

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 1, 2010

Nice song

Like has been said before, the levels are a bit low and the progression is a bit slow, but it is a solid song. Practice with some compression on your vocals and guitars the drums are overpowering yet the guitars blend with the vocals a lot...try tweaking on the mastering a little more, but still a good song



ChronamutChronamut

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 30, 2010

mhm.. interesting..

levels are a bit low though - like volume wise.. at at least it doesn't peak - also while having your voicei n bg gives a cool effect - I feel it need to sound more intense - on a levels pov that is

also maybe a bit more of a radio effect on it - or with more FEELING - like a metallica song - it's just you have this metal song and then your vocals sorta PG it - your stereo placesment also feels a tad confused - it's sort of all over the place - and a bit muddy - song writing wise though it's great - but productino wise it needs a lot of work ;)

get some pointers from Bad-Man-Inc - I used to critique his stuff a long time ago and slowly got it so that his songs are more or less perfect now :)

keep on improving though!

-shawn-



mr-vincentmr-vincent

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 30, 2010

NIce song at all

This is a good song, but you need a little something to improve it...

Song quality: 6
Guitar tuning: 5
Voice: 9

Ti improve quality, you should improve drum recording, sound is peaking hmm like.... (volume is to high).

You should rise up the master volume, it's hard to hear the song...

Anyway, great work, keep it rock !



SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 29, 2010

...Wow

This is the best I've heard on NG Audio Portal in... a long time. Seriously, wow.

When a piece like this comes along, I have a hard time writing a review, because all I can think of saying is that it sounds great and is awesome.

The melody is really catchy. In general the song is technical enough to sound interesting and still simple enough to be very entertaining to pretty much anyone. I liked the double vocals, whether it was overdubbing or two vocalists.

The drums were also pretty interesting, and varied, but they might have been a bit too loud, as opposed to guitars which were maybe a bit too low.

This track goes in my favourites, now.

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