Fair.

Your intro was weak, making me wait far too long for the buildup to release. You made me wait about 28 seconds for what I wanted to hear, in any form of media, that is multiple eternities. Shorten your intro.

After that wait, I found myself well rewarded with an uplifting, fast paced beat. It kind of felt like finding the light at the end of a tunnel.

I suggest finishing and editing this song. Sounds like it could actually be something.