advice apreciated :D ummm....yea. dont know what else to say.
What are you going for?
I would recommend if you're using Fl Studio not to use the shitty kick's and claps, and to use either drum loops in slicer for the use of their kick, snare, or clap. Some hats also sounds pretty cool when pogo'd. Your synths kinda suck, take some time and find on that really works for you.
Like the chime/Triangle ya got going on, and the later synth, as opposed to the first two.
im not sure what im going for honestly. still playing around with a bit. and its just the trial version unfortunately. ive watched a couple of tutorials on youtube for like slides and thats about it. oh, and layers. havent tried that yet. nonetheless, thanks for the tips and encouragement. im if-y about using the drum loops. like, when i first got into it, i would only chain them together, so i guess i wasnt really making my own music so to speak. but i suppose theres no harm in using a loop or two.
Put a rapid fire sound to it...
like near the end pupuuupuuu!!! *that was a sound affect* >.>
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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