Sounds nice enough but...
First of all... this track doesnt belong in Drum and Bass. The melodies are nice, the ambience is a great touch, and the choir was done well but... the drum bugs me to no end... its way too simple and sounds lame after a short time. The track is pretty aside from the harsh guitar. The pace is quite slow and the whole thing is quiet.
Its nice to listen to in the background... reminds me of old games like doom. Needs work and a huge dose of style and flavor.
Keep it up.