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piano vs buzz (v1.0)

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hello,
i just recently made this song.
note that it begins very slow.
i think it's ok, but not perfect though.
can you people help me and tell me how to make it better? :O

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A bit lacking

I'll first say, it's a very good start, but if I were to analyze the entire song it seems it is nothing but a series of different lead lines/melodies, some with a drum track, others without. So basically, minus the drums, on a keyboard the song could be played with just one hand.

You are looking for ways to improve, and keep in mind this is only my opinion, but I think the song could use at the least, bass lines and also I think adding some backing chords couldn't hurt. Nothing loud or too noticable, but I think it could go a long way.

I also can't help but ask what program you used. I'm not really a big fan of the retro sounds, but it all depends on what you were going for.

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Downloads
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Score
Waiting for 4 more votes

Uploaded
Jul 9, 2010
1:47 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
4.6 MB
4 min 3 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.