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Jul 5, 2010 | 4:26 PM EDT
File Info
Song
2.4 MB
2 min 7 sec
Score
4.15 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.15 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
841 Plays | 78 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

I made the beat and recorded using Logic Express sometime around January 2010
Never really hardcore finished the mixing, still a novice in the mixing process
Hopefully will be giving you clearer cleaner and better tracks as time goes on

Verse 1:
I see the thunder clouds loomin
Our impending doom is soon to be bloomin, we're wasted in the ruins
Hatred in the humans, with all the crimes brewin
My mind does the choosin wrong moves now I'm loosin
Wasted in the muck
Fools hastly given up
Can't take it so embrace it face a bullet to the gut
Triggers pull? then throats i cut
Ridicules aint big enough
I can't hear so shut me up
come over here I'll f*ck u up
With a slap and a pop and a bang then you drop
what remains is a lot of destain cuz its hot
campaign on a block
or slang that dang rock you can change or change not
Can't control what you do when your mind comes construed
Money for the party? or money for the shoes?
Cuz the tread wore through and my toes turn blue
and the skys all gray and the minutes are oh so few

Hook:
You can blame all the pot
the booze and the shots
mischevious plots
and put all the skeezy ladies there on top

Verse 2
Just in luck im stuck in the memories
Lookin in the mirror and i see my enemy
Its big blunts and hennesey
Its got me feelin free but its really killin me
Is stil in me the drive to rise up from the bottom
I strive to strecth my stride while im plannin and plottin
But im i lost in the land of forgotten
nobodys catchin my rhymes when they're droppin
press start and resume with no stoppin
I been coughin up blood and feelin like a stick in the mud
and i script this because no medicinal drugs
fake raps what they wanna talk about
blaze a heater to their mouth yeah that'll thaw em out
NOt a bullet it in my heart but a trigger on my brain
Pinpointed at somethin i don't feel love or pain
ITs the same thing im pullin a crane
in a foolish little game and im doodlin while im playin

Hook

Reviews


playshiftplayshift

Rated 2 / 5 stars

well

the chorus is terribly boring and un-catchy
you try too hard to rhyme alot and its very obvious.
i like when people can form sentencing while rhyming alot though so you get points there
you need to have more emotion in your songs
i feel like you are just reading off the paper with some rhythm and you dont even know what you are saying. and because you dont have any feeling in what you say i dont believe anything you say in the song about any drugs or drinks or anything. the recording quality isnt bad. its not good but it works for something like this.
4/10
2/5



zayaplayazayaplaya

Rated 5 / 5 stars

dang!!!!!!!!!!!

*speachless*.!!!!!!!!!!!!



LyRikLyNkLyNdLyRikLyNkLyNd

Rated 5 / 5 stars

all that bullshit

THis shit is nice. Great mission, fcuk a statement thats just sum bullshit. first verse is fuckin bangin. I like what your doin man, All 4 tracks I've seen are good. Keep throwin shit like this and you'll be even better at it in no time. I've still got my book of poems, but they're all digital now with new starters everyday. Keep up the good work homie. Money for the party? or money for the shoes?
Cuz the tread wore through and my toes turn blue...Aite i'm dun bullshittin