uhhh
there's no reason this song should be 4:31, should be about 2 minutes. you have your "hook" go for like 70% of the song and your verses last extremely short.
besides that it's okay. hard to understand at some points.
no need to talk shit to gloine though when this isn't up to par lyrically with him at all. and you were one of the ones that think exceptid actually shoulda won that competition? not helping your case son...